All Comments on ''05 Never'

flows well, seems like it was written in one surge of activity. Keep up the good work.

Not only do thoughts

Race around;

But they're racing to be

Free

The poet's character seems to have adopted the idea, "Don't worry about it none; 'cause it ain't going to be alright - no how. A very spirit of despair seems to pervade these verses.

Flowed well. Not too little, nor too much. Very personal and exhibits a very personal outletting. Personally, I would suggest verses imagining the feelings felt two years down the line.

Creates in me at least, a wish to read more from this person, to see what else lies within.