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shattered trees (haiku)

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by Angeline11/20/05

Your Poem

has been mentioned in the New Poems review thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.

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by sack11/20/05

love this!!

I wish the poem could have been presented as three lines.

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by twelveoone11/20/05

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yeh, yeh, yeh
wrens - gets a 100 from me, as atonement, been on a wren wrecking kick of late
but as far as haiku go, you are one of the best of the white men

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by wildsweetone11/20/05

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i understand this, thank you. :)
wso

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by cward211/24/05

Perfect

You've captured a moment of time and described it in the most wonderful way.Perfect!

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by Bill Dada11/26/05

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Feels like you've created a moment in time.
ty,bd

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