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Eating Peaches, Peeling Bananas

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/28/05

Fruit Cocktails Anyone.

It's great to see good new writers coming through and posting good work. Two great stories on the trot, and the current one made 9.5 weeks look limp.

Keep up the good work, I have no doubt that you will have a network of fans before long.

Hugs'N'Stuff

David

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by pixie200212/18/05

Wonderfully descriptive

A most erotic fruit snack delivered in a most erotic story. Thanks for the tasty treat!

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by Anonymous08/02/09

Mmm...made me hungry...

...for dessert.

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by TheMatrix7237004/03/10

Could have been better with one change.

As I was reading this story, I was wondering why you chose to make the characters a lesbian couple. I think it would have made for a better story if you had made them friends. Clara would have been the lesbian vegetarian, while the unnamed narrator would have been a straight fast food junkie. This story would have been the narrator's initiation into both lesbian sex and vegetarianism.

Thank you,
George Waldman
TheMatrix72370@yahoo.com

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