All Comments on 'The Hotel Window Story Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
The Lucky Viewers of this Hotel Window Story Ch.01

You will want to be this lucky guy to have something this wonderful happen to you in full view of everyone! Cam't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Just stories

You mention in your bio that your stories are just stories. Your stories are excellent but, like most stories on this site, they are written to describe an erotic experience, even if that experience is completely fictional. The erotic experience described in stories activates (or not) specific areas of the brain that govern sexuality. In an erotic story, ideas become sexual experiences (fictional or otherwise). The things that are considered erotic will vary somewhat from person to person so some ideas / experiences will resonate more with some than with others. The better the resonation the closer the connection between the writer and the reader.

In my case, the idea that resonates with me is captured in the following sentence: "I grab the soap and razor, deciding to give you my own surprise, shaving off all the hair until I'm baby smooth." That sentence of the story creates a bright flash in the area of my brain that governs sexuality. It stimulates me in a way that it might not for others. I adore a shaved pussy and it's hard for me to imagine that the idea doesn't appeal to you. I believe (rightly or wrongly) that you have shaved your pussy in real life and that you find it sexually stimulating in some way. You accentuate the experience for me with sentences like "You.....move your other hand down to my cunt, feeling how hot and wet I am..."

If there is an idea / experience that appeals to me even more than a shaved pussy, it's a beautiful shaved wet cunt.

Hence, your story is more than just a story. It affects me in a positive way. I enjoyed it because it resonated with me. You touched my hot buttons.

Thank you and may you and your beautiful wet cunt be blessed with the things that give you the greatest pleasure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
great writting..

sounds like you have before.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hotel Window

Great Story. Reminds me of a great weekend with my wife.

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