All Comments on 'Candy Cane'

Grrrr, now THAT is my kinda snack!!!

I love this naughty lil tale. You changed it a bit, and I like it better this way my friend. Now, I am gonna go see if I can find myself a lil candy ... *Winks n Giggles *

Umm ... I also like the way you wrote the music in, and it flowed really well. A bump here and there, it still is a good story. I like !!!

More Plez ~~!!

I've been here, done this! The large candy canes work better, but your visuals were wonderful! Thanks for bringing back a great memory!

Art... your always naughty and make me smile.

Always, Lizzy

This was great! I loved the addition of all the Christmas carols and other holiday stuff (breasts like a Christmas ornament! Who would have thought of that as a metaphor! Good one! :) and she was definitely sweet. Good luck in the contest!

The Night Before Christmas

will never read the same

now that I've read

of the naughty Candy Cane!!

Good one Art.

great read, great laugh. only in the mind of "arto" lol

love,

nin-

From the devilishly clever mind of Art. Thanks for the read and good luck!

Cookie :)

I'll never be able to suck on a candy cane without wanting to do it that way....

Great story, Art

~Honey

I really enjoyed this. What a fun read.

Very best of luck to you in the contest!!

you did well with the naughty nicties of Xmas.. well done Art

du

That was a fun read, ET, and sooo educational. Good luck in the contest.

Best of luck in the contest, Tale... a very fun read!

I'll never look at a candy cane the same way. Very hot story. Good luck!

but I thought it a bit repititous and a little hard to believe. "Taut", meaning tight, as in "Her lips were taut" is a homonym of "taught".

Super hot, like it's been said, I don't think I'll ever look at a candy cane the same way again! This fic was positively yummy!

I've never particularly cared for peppermint, but I just may have to give it another, um, whirl. Great story, Art.

Peppermint.... Yummy! I've had peppermint used as a toy on me before. It's delightful. Warm and cool at the same time. The drippings are colored red, so if you can't keep the thought of blood out of your head, that can be a downer. The minty smell might help with that.