This is an incredibly sexy poem. I wish there were a thousand like it.
really sensous erotic poem,woman to woman,that even men can identify with,fanastic.
It is difficult to be carried along by the author's passion when every few feet(of the meter), some lapse of scansion or wording derails the progress of the ideas.
I have now read a few bits of your work and wont be bothering again.
Poetry doesn't have to rhyme and you just try tooo bloody hard.
Do not give up your day job!!!
Very original/creative, especially how you put the word "cunnilingus" into an acronym, utilizing each letter in the word to start off each verse....loved it!
Me thinks Anonymous is jealous! As am I...of your talents in writing stories, poetry, as well as your love and pleasuring of women.
Keep up the good work.
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