by jacinta
Striking and original. The idea is fabulous – although the beginning is less than arresting. I continued to read because I was fascinated by your other story about Jacinta. That was so well-written that I was willing to read on, to find my way into this. Chat-stories are incredibly difficult to carry off successfully. You managed that so well in the second half. You're an excellent and original writer. Keep on with it. 5 stars and Brava.