All Comments on 'Travieso'

A nice twist on the St. Nick stories with the Yin/Yang factor. Good luck

is in the humor satire category, it wasn't funny but was well written and enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.

Interesting idea but why humor? It just seems an odd choice. Good luck!

Cookie :)

Made me smile, good story.

I love the idea!! I'm seeing a sequel here, run with it baby!!! This was fun.

Abs.

You've been bombed. *kisses* Nice work. ~Imp

Great job.. had me hooked from the start! But alas.. I don't want a red dildoe... unless it comes with a girl!

... I guess I know who is delivering at my house this year. *smiles* Nice job Sal had me grinning. Good luck in the contest.

Always, Lizzy

...for the second big smile you put

on my face this morning ; ) Thanks for sharing this

& very best of luck to you in your first contest!

Loved this story, Sal...Tara's my kinda gal..and Travieso...ohhhhh, just yummy..

~Honey

For naughty's sake? Fantastic premise! I really enjoyed your characterization, and I chuckled at the palm pilot and "dork" comment. Definitely wouldn't mind a visit from this guy... oooo what am I admitting to? <grin> Good luck in the contest!

and good luck in the contest!!

Ahhhh, Sal, you always have the best toys--i knew i wanted to play at your house. Well written, naughty idea--loved it. I'm sure Santa is smiling right now.

or roses for that matter. I now know what every good girl wants.

I've been naughty this year- do you think he'll bring me what I want???

Nice twist. Great job

What a fun story! Great idea, Sal, and very nicely done.

Very good job on setting and a clever twist to the usual Christmas story. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

Everybody wants a visit from Travieso! Very well done!

What language is that, by the way? Sounds Italian.

Now....how do we get on this list?

Great tack to take diverging from the norm. A well done and flowing tale nicely told. Very fun read. Thanks Sal

por favor, escribe mas historias asi :) Well-written, fun, and damn do I need un hombre travieso in my life :)

Happy holiday and good luck in the contest.

Ali

I sure hope I made his list this year...I've been wanting a red acrylic toy too. *swoon*

Great story. I like your take, very much.

v~

I think I'll address my Christmas list to Anti-Claus this year!

Fun read. Thanks.

Hurry down my chimney tonight....*brilliant smile*

One of the better stories I have read on here, darlin.

Or should that be...Master....*purrrrrrrr*

with a clever twist. No reason why the boys and girls who are considered to be bad whould be left out. I believe, by the way, the original "Santa Baby" was sung by Eartha Kitt. I think it was in 1953 and she recorded another version of it the following Christmas.

Highly amusing, Sir Thumb. Wish I could meet Travieso. Good opening too. It really caught my attention, cuz I 'member seeing those glass dildos on an episode of Real Sex.

I like stories that put a smile on my face and keep it there through the end. I love it, so much fun to read.

very fun read...so if I admit I'm naughty do I get more from Travieso my list is sooooo long...good job!!

This was humorus and a great read!