All Comments on 'A Flower of Asia'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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I enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing. :)

Curiouswife

mcopadomcopadoover 18 years ago
Lovely

You stated that it wasn't meant to be erotic, but to be honest I thought the imagery was...It evoked the female form much like the Song of Solomon in the Bible...Great use of metaphor...I might be biased though, my girlfriend is Asian. Keep submitting, and writing.

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