All Comments on 'No one wins'

Moving and heartrending poem of giving up and having 'enough'

Sad but well portrayed.

There is just too much sadness in our lives and you are well able to communicate that.

I hope that life and the gods conspire to bring you true happiness during this season that cries for joy!

Please keep sharing yourself in your stories; it is by learning that others are like us we can face the world with a braver heart. (There are reasons why I like to write stories with happy endings, but sometimes the dark side wins out!)

God bless!

Moving 'portrait' of pain and resignation. Well woven and presented, but intensely sad. Thank you

DC:

You seem to be on an introspective tour and are not happy with that portion of you that is looking at your relationship with your loved one because the love has become one-sided. I had a friend once who was married to the worst woman in the world. I asked him why? His answer floored me; When its good it's heaven. When its bad its horrible, but you keep hoping, praying, and waiting for the good to return again. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Poignant sadness ~ the old love's died;

and what's left......?

no longer on a losing streak, TK U MLJ LV NV