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sacksackover 18 years ago
well written, this could make a good series!

The characters are believable, as are the potential situations. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Billy Ray

More coming perhaps about Billy Ray and Michael Stevens?

rudystahrmanrudystahrmanover 18 years ago
I want more

I want to read more, however, in this story I had trouble remembering the fuckee was a man. The story made it sound like he was a girl.(the fuckee).

Should have had a little more build up of sexual tension, and Billy Ray came too fast, and so did you. I did like the story line, and it shows a lot of possibilities.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
The head of my crotch?

right

B4DR0M4NC3B4DR0M4NC3over 13 years ago

Please do the next part it was great

63lsmith63lsmithover 9 years ago
OH MAN

Nothing like 2 young men, enjoying themselves. Loved it.

vlar349vlar349about 2 years ago

Great story very hot and enjoyable. Thank you!

Looking forward to next part please

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