All Comments on 'Caught By My Sister'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
not bad

could of had sister wearing silk panties to many thong stories get old

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Ho Hum. Wake me when it's over.

Seems to me that I've read this story 50-60 times before

songman60songman60over 18 years ago
Good Story, But....

Fairly good story, but you seem to have a problem with "run-on sentences". Apparently you do not have an editor. I would be more than happy to volunteer my services.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
no

wow learn some grammer...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Average

Not a bad incest story but plain vanilla efforts like this are a dime a dozen. More creativity needed on setting and scenario.

To the less intelligent critic below: I believe the words you were fumbling for were, "Wow, learn some grammar." Try to form actual sentences with punctuation and correct spelling the next time you want to comment on someone's grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
i liked it

This was a very good read and i enjoyed it thoroughly, keep on writing. =)

Michelle JoMichelle Joover 13 years ago
Nice ...

Wonderful story, short but not without a story line, HOT but not to the point of being totally unbelievable. Thanks.

Michelle JoMichelle Joover 13 years ago

Wonderful story, short but not without a story line, HOT but not to the point of being totally unbelievable. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hmmmmm..........

Hmmm...... It was an ok story but it could use some more creativaty and no offence but grammer check other than that keep on writting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
WO WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

I BET YOUR SISTER SUCKS DICK REAL GOOD SHE CAN SUCK MY DICK ANYTIME /

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
is she ready?

so is your little sis ready for my massive black cock ?i'm ready to fill her up with evry drop of breeding seed that i have

humantouchhumantouchover 11 years ago
humor

I rarely comment on stories, but I had to say good job on this one. I think that stories here need more humor in them. Whether it's subtle or goofy, it is something authors should try their hand at at least once. thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Insest love

I would love to lick your hot cum from your sisters hot wet pussy. I have licked A black man's sperm from my own sister's pussy many of times. I also love to suck a hot cock after it's been in her tight ass and pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Sexy

This is the sexiest story ever.... I've been wanting to fuck my sister for forever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Umm

Really really hot! Made me cum!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Love it will their be

Another chapter? Maybe 2 or 3 more? Please?

dreamer31adreamer31aabout 1 year ago

hope theres more to cum

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