by alucardi
Run all of your stories past spell and grammar check before you post them. You could also have a volunteer Lit Editor proof read them. Keep writing more chapters and add more sex!!!
I really liked it it was well written and fucking awesome the way Alucard got his revenge on the Van Helsing family by turning them into vampires as well And I liked the way he went about getting his servants under his control by totally dominating them and turning them into his willing sex slaves .I hope you write more of the series ! Keep up the good fucking job
GREAT STORY ! I LOVED THE WAY IT WAS DONE FROM THE BEGINNING AND HOW THE COUNT MADE THEM HIS SEX SLAVES AND THEN HOW THE WOMEN TURNED THE OTHER WOMEN AND MAN INTO VAMPIRES AND THE COUNT TOTALLY HUMILATED RACHEL VAN HELSING BY HAVING HER GRANDFATHER AND THE OTHERS TOTALLY ABUSING HER AS WELL UNTIL SHE LOST HER MIND ,! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE THE STORY AND KEEP THE STORIES CUMMING AND CUMMING AND CUMMING AND CUMMING ! I KNOW I DID SEVERAL TIMES IN FACT AND AS I WRITE THIS IM READY TO CUM AGAIN AND AGAIN ! THANKS SO MUCH !