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Before You Wake

byBelegon©
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by Anonymous

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by hugo_sam12/01/05

Beautiful

Wonderful capture of a single moment of stillness and caring. Well done Bel! Super.

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by Anonymous12/01/05

A very lucky woman!

Hope she knows it. ~Imp

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by LeBroz12/01/05

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A moment of waking ~
Of love and caring.

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by cloudy12/01/05

Lovely

What I wouldn't give to have what you described...beautiful.

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by sophia jane12/01/05

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You captured a beautiful moment- great job.

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by Bill Dada12/11/05

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A precious moment, preciously described.
ty, bd

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by average gina12/21/05

Well, dammit...

All of the words that describe this poem have been taken! This is a lovely moment of perfect serenity. I like the perception that the two people have been together for a long time: his presuming her thoughts as if to feel what she feels and thinks. It reads like hot chocolate, warm and creamy.

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by duddle14602/07/07

intimate

That private intimate time ~ just before the woman you love wakes up ~ and gives you that first Good Morning kiss.

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by tazz31705/15/12

TO LIVE FOR A MOMENT

upon waking and reaching for more. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by AVirtue12/09/12

Very sweet :)

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