Before You Wake

Beautiful

Wonderful capture of a single moment of stillness and caring. Well done Bel! Super.

A very lucky woman!

Hope she knows it. ~Imp

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A moment of waking ~
Of love and caring.

Lovely

What I wouldn't give to have what you described...beautiful.

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You captured a beautiful moment- great job.

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A precious moment, preciously described.
ty, bd

Well, dammit...

All of the words that describe this poem have been taken! This is a lovely moment of perfect serenity. I like the perception that the two people have been together for a long time: his presuming her thoughts as if to feel what she feels and thinks. It reads like hot chocolate, warm and creamy.

intimate

That private intimate time ~ just before the woman you love wakes up ~ and gives you that first Good Morning kiss.

TO LIVE FOR A MOMENT

upon waking and reaching for more. TK U MLJ LV NV

Very sweet :)