All Comments on 'Drifted Debris'

by wildsweetone

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Some fun at the shore imagery.

TheRainManTheRainManover 18 years ago
Nice reading.

This has a smooth flow to it. And for the most part, the language is not overdone. From the short time I have been here, I think your writing shows genuine progress, and pretty quickly.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
need an umbrella?

or a car port? <grin> nice write~

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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