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TheRainManTheRainManover 18 years ago
I think this poem has great potential.

I find a lot of very good lines here. I think you should compress it, removing extraneous material, to heighten the impact on the reader. There seem to be a lot of dead spots among the verylively ones.

One of my favorite poems of the day, though.

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