All Comments on 'Debra the HCA'

you lose the thread -------- the premise is that he's incapable of doing anything for himself but then suddenly starts pulling her hair etc. etc.

Certainly not the most realistic story that I've every read.

It got me hot but it was pretty far fetched. Would have been better if the HCA had done the treatment and taught the sister.

Having the sister's friends involved seem pointless.

Got all hot and stuff, then finaly I could not take the unrealizm anymore, to bad.

A broken ankle and wrist and you need your sister and a nurse assistant to take care of you? What a whiny pathetic character. I know quadriplegic people who do a lot in their lives without anyone helping them, and your character needs two people to take care of him because of a broken wrist and ankle?!

This exact same thing happenend to me! It was like re-living the day I finally fucked my sisters arse. The nurse was an excellent addition to the story, as were the friends who 'witnessed' the special occasion. So cool. I want more!!!!

very unrealistic you say at the start he broke both wrists and one ankle yet you say later that he signed the contract and pull his casts off never going to happen keep it atleast sounding realistic and believable

"Oh that's more better" Yeah, she's professional material alright :/. Your plot is lacking, even for a bad porn flick.

I'd love this to be real! I think there should be a squele. Now that would be interesting

That was so stupid. All it needed was some ridiculous alien to appear at the end and reveal it was all a mind control experiment and have Elvis walk out.

Some editing and cleaning up a plot holes and stuff the story could be a lot better inconsistencies on names as well Nicole became Nicola