All Comments on 'Wife Pounding'

how can you get off on this shit.

Anyone? I just don't see it.

Toni, Henry, who was who and what was what? The ending doesn't link with the story, it's just confused. You need to read it through before posting and edit it better. Also, the subject matter sucks.

This is too much. No paragraph breakkdowns and confusing. This is not an erotic story. More like a couple of dogs...

Suggest writer reread his story after he thinks it's completed and do it more than once on different days. I find every time I reread my latest story I end up modifityng it for the better.

what was this ...kinda rambled huh ....lol oh well this is one i hope dont try and try again

And aside from the bad writing, it was just plain garbage. If you were able to muddle thru it!

Or, I suppose it is, since once I got to that unintened pun, I stopped reading...

And suppose in all that gooey mess between your and her pubic areas that she "lost it all" and started peeing, flooding your balls and dick with her hot piss as you shot your cum deep into her, making a baby in her fertile valley?

Everybody was drunk, including the author. Next time lay off the booze before writing. Better yet, grab your bottle and go lay in an alley somewhere out of the way.

First off a "0" score for disrespecting yourself as well as all the semi-normal folk who read this subhuman male demeaning humiliation crap not knowing how base and perverted you would get.

Why in anybodies name would a new writer choose to fuck himself respectwise with a pimp your wife whore out to watch a larger cock - then suck his cock and lick his ass.

You really are a sick puppy aren't you writer - damn - I don't think you took the time to read - to learn your audience. You were too busy jacking off over how far below human convention you could tout this pitiful male - this frustrated humiliated not quite a man or husband to a few sicko's who are so low and jaded that it takes crude absurd subhuman feces type shit to get it up and off. I take it you need it also writer - it excites you eh - try it little sick one - get it off your mind - talk to your wife - she may never respect you again under her roof - she doen't need you to pimp her out - she needs a real man with balls not a sorid wimp who like to watch cocks - suck cocks - lick assholes.

Pathetically sad!!! & Embarrassing for you! Get some help then move this to FETISH with the other dark subhuman atrocities!

THIS STORY REALLY SUCKED, I URGE U TO TRY AGAIN.

read the first few lines that was enought but u will improve in your writings can't get worse

I thought it was a good story but not long enough. I'm hoping there are additional chapters. Keep going.

I thought it was a good story but not long enough. I'm hoping there are additional chapters. Keep going.

Where in the world is her "erroneous zone?"

Or maybe edited poorly and constructed worse! Take your pick. There is NO rationale provided for Hubby to have engineered the seduction, then 'cleaned up' Henry the Bull! Not saying it didn't or couldn't have happened, just that we know too little from this Flash Story for it to make any sense!

How did Hubby know his Sweetie had this untapped sexual resource? Had Hubby tried to tap that reservoir before and failed? How did Hubby know the Bull could uncover her latent treasure? The potential for a much better story is certainly there, maybe Henry can bring THAT out as well!

2*

You could use a proofreader, though.

Sad really...i gave it a 1 and didnt even read it

A dumb whore is dangerous.

It sucks I hope you have a day job.

Good story, Henry is absolutely right, the wife will become a slut, and hubby will become a cuckold loser, until his now hot wife tires of having hubby's faggot arse about the place and chucks him out, serve him right, what a fuckin dickhead.