All Comments on 'Marrying for Money Ch. 07'

Thanks for all the supportive comments. I just want to say, in my defense, that I posted the entire book already (13 chapters in all) several days ago. I am not the one who is taking forever to get them posted. I guess that is a Literotica webmaster thing??

Sorry for keeping you all in suspense, but the rest of the story is submitted and waiting to be posted. Thanks again for commenting. I really enjoy getting your feedback.

By the way, I also posted a short story that should come out any day now. It should be in the erotic coupling section, and it is called "Class Reunion". Check it out if you are interested.

Cheers,

Haremgirl

Can't wait to see the rest of the story posted. Keep up the great work!

I still think that you are a fantastic writer.

I put you on my favorites list after I read parts one and two because of it. But you don't know how much I thank you for telling me that this story is 13 chapters long. This way I can wait to see when all of it is finished posting and I can read all of your story as it was written all at once. I don't mind a little suspense, but the story is written well enough I am going a little stir crazy to see how it ends. This way I know when I can sit down and read it all at once.

Thanks again and keep up the writing. You have an impressive style.

-Risq

I can't wait for the next installment!

This has been a most enjoyable submission. As I read it I find myself thinking about the importance of good communication between husband and wife. My wife and I often close the door to our bedroom and just share our most intimate thoughts. Then we share our physical love. It is very sexy to do this in this order.

You are killing me and I'm not joking. I'm going to have a heart attack. If Trevor doesn't get to Leanna before she sleeps with Neville then I don't know what to do. Please have a new submission tomorrow. PLEASE if you love your loyal readers!

Haremgirl,

I LOVE your writing! You have such a whimsical way with words. Love the heavy heat and romance. Keep it up! Hope to read more from you soon :)

can't wait to read on...this was wonderful, as always. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

You started off well enough but along the way, you've started to drag the story. The husband, does not make a dashing strong hero material and the heroine well if se's considering to marry another guy while the guy's lovemaking leaves her feeling tepid is pathic.

While I don't want to discourage you but you started off beautifully but by chapter 7; am yawning of boredom. Please read ladyofthemasque, black tulip(literotica) or Julie Garwood or Jayne Ann Krentz(romance novelists)before attempting another story.I mean the should be humor, a touch of dashing and a pinch of mystery in the story.

Good luck and hope to c more from you soon but am not going any further than chapter 7, pg 1.

THIS IS RIDICULOUS. SHE IS MOVING ON AFTER A FEW WEEKS! SHE WON'T TELL HIM ABOUT HIS CHILD...THAT IS WRONG! He was stupid not to say he loved her. but she has gone about all of this wrong.

you are driving me freakin crazy as this gets more ridiculous and f'd up. i hope this story turns in the right direction soon!!! I really hope you don't have them sleep together before he gets to her!

This is taking an unexpected poor ly thought out turn. Don't like this new direction!

Wow!!! Such emotion in these comments. The hallmark of a good writer. I wish my stories were this good.

Well, I don’t know what to hope for, now that she’s ENGAGED?? Hello?? So wrong I feel so lost