All Comments on 'Trailing Home'

Just one more thing. For those who are wanting a story that gets right into the sex, this isn't it. There will be sex, and plenty of it, but Liam and Selena have to get to know each other a bit better first. :)

Just one note of caution. For those who are wanting a story that gets right into the sex, this isn't it. There will be sex, and plenty of it, but Liam and Selena have to get to know each other a bit better first. :)

This has the earmarks of a good story of survival and growth. I look forward to the continuing saga.

Great Start Haremgirl!!

Can't wait for next chapter.

A good beginning for your story. I look forward to reading more.

Boyd

Dear Haremgirl!

I took a peek ahead before writing this, and I thank You for a nice story, please carry on!

John

so happy to get to start to read your new story. i just started a new job or i would play catch up in one night and get it read...but then what would i have to read over the weekend*smile*. Excellent start and look forward to another excellent read. Thank you for writing for us. respectfully as always fan in Texas naynay

i like everything about it...the historical setting, the frontier theme, the character development, story arcs et al. selena is such a plucky, spunky survivor and fighter. it is wonderful to see the unveiling of her true nature over the course of the journey cross country.

there are just a few niggling things such as the anachronistic use of words such as "relax", "massage", "okay". i may be wrong and these were in common parlance during the period, but it just seems a shame that you have put in so much effort to get the details of the oregon crossing authentic to have the occasional dialogue slip up.

anyway, i do like the substance of this love story and i adore liam and selena. if you get this published, please update your profile with the info!

Good story.

I'm in for a really great read! Looking forward to it. Will check back in after I've get through a couple or three chapters. I don't think I'll be disappointed with what's to come. Thanks...take care wherever you are in this world. claire

One of the best authors on this website. I'm gonna get you voted up to the top where you belong. Post some new stories...

We've been filled in on the reasons why they are heading to Oregon, now we want to know the rest of the story. I'm sure it will be interesting...

Not my normal genre but your writing is so good. Wish you would write again, most of your stories should be top ten....

Very good read. Looking forward to the other chapters. Five stars!

It looks a though some addictive reading has presented itself. I will pursue their common trail. Thank you.