All Comments on 'Mom Sucks Black Coach At Park'

by DonnaDuGood

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Lack of Imagination

Same old crap. White mom (woman) swoons at the first sight of a big black cock. Wouldnt it be a surprise if the black guy was average in size and had to actually work to seduce the woman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
lack of perceptiveness, anon

She didn't need to use her imagination because it happened. The story was unadorned. It didn't tease. It didn't build. It didn't romanticize the size. It just told what happened to achieve a catharsis; to admit regret out loud because she can't do it elsewhere; to get some level of self-forgiveness. It sounds real to me and tha's either or good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
give her a break

hey she was honest,it wasnt some made up story i found it exciting becacuse it was original.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
nice and hot

that is a kind of story which feels real and probably is

thanks for sharing

nightwyngnightwyngover 18 years ago
I liked this...

This was a refreshing read from an obviously sexually frustrated wife that savor'd things different. I could give a shit for the B/W aspect rather I found her love for her husband outshined by her mere need for some erotic excitement to be a good read.

Nay sayers and all, you did well hon with your first work. Keep offering up those fantasies that I KNOW YOU HOLD INSIDE.

Night~ : )

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
thanks

hi thanks for sharing this TRUE story with us

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Coach

That was good, don't be ashamed. You wanted some black cock and now maybe after a while, you may decide you want to fuck Marvin. Hell I say go for it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Not The Truth.

If this story is true, all it shows is a lack of respect for herself, her husband, family and the wedding rings on her hand. It would have been a better story if her husband found out and dumped her.

Don GrampaDon Grampaabout 18 years ago
WELL WRITTEN

Donna you should try writing another story. You write well enough to just write out a fantasy. Don't kid us, we all know you have at least one other fantasy. Maybe its having sex with a much older guy with a little dick. (Just making fun, but I know you could write a fiction story.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Who cares

Give her a break. "lack of respect for herself, husband, family....." What a load of crap. I liked it. It may have even helped her son get a college scholarship playing ball........lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Well Written

Nice job describing the details....I have a guilt problem also...thanks for sharing. joe Daddypamps@aol.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I agree w/ the Who cares comment

Nice story DonnaDuGood. The person who wrote that "lack of respect..." BS sounds like someone who has a few fantasys themself that they're trying to surpress. And I also think you should write somemore. Thanks for the story. Keeps my hope up anyways that someday I'll score like that coach :)

dale06511@yahoo.com

readyrider53readyrider53almost 17 years ago
We all have it

Donna you did a great job and don't even consider what those have said in disagreement. We all have it in us to do something that we have never done. The reason we haven't done it is we have never had the opportunity. I would love the opportunity to make love to a black woman it has been a fantasy of mine for years. I have been into self bondage for years my wife is all unknowing about it. Two months ago I met a Mistress online. She has helped me with several things and I hope to meet her in the near future. Unlike you there is no sex involved but the heights of orgasm she can bring you too is wonderful. I feel no remorse about it if it is a piece of your life that is empty and you have the chance to fill it go for it. Be discreet and enjoy what has been offered to you. And think of those who have never had the opportunity. WW

Gary13Gary13about 16 years ago
Great story, Donna!

I can't believe the idiots who are criticizing your story! It was sincere, telling exactly what happened, and I love it. If their opinion is so valuable, why don't they identify themselves and show us what they have produced? I have not yet read part 2. I do fear that the critics will prevent you from trying again. Gary

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
...XXXcellent!!!...ENCORE!!!...

...these things happen!!!...YOU CAN BE PROUD!!!...YOU GO GIRL!!!...but you should become a breeder vessel for the hot black seed to breed a fresh new american race...BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL!!!...admit it, the guy is a BLACK ADONIS!!!...GO BACK FOR MORE!!..AND MORE!!..AND MORE!!...your gorgeous white tummy filled with BLACK BABY SEED!!!..giving yourself to the coach...to create new 'players'...YOU GO GIRL!!!..and forget the underminded cockroaches...you probably have already..KEEP YOUR EYES ON THE PRIZE!!!...the EXTINCTION of whitey..the now worthless culture!!!

JanieTgirlJanieTgirlalmost 15 years ago
Excellent

Forget the negatives and downers on your story. It was fantastic. Beautiful, gentle and heartfelt. I was wishing I was Donna and found a man like Marvin. Still do actually. Thanks and keep up your writing.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 14 years ago
Very hot.

I love true stories, and I thought the deail you included was extremely sexy. Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
hmmm

I really only feel bad for your son in all this. I guess children really do get the worst in a parent's decision

LaidbackoneandopenLaidbackoneandopenover 13 years ago
Dirty bitch

Did you feel like a dirty bitch swallowing all that black spunk? I think watching a woman suck or fuck any man is good and as long as you both are happy then suck and fuck who you want.

Adam RightmannAdam Rightmannabout 12 years ago
Thanks for writing this

You can think about this to spice things up with your husband.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Excellent

White women loved black cock, We crave it! I do. If my husband could read my mind he would kill me. If he knew the things I have done crap can you be killled twice?

dirtyomandirtyomanover 10 years ago
Very nice

Delicious, little story. Wish you had fucked him too. But this has just the right amount of reality, surprize, & sex. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I think all white women would be better off to try black man at least once.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
my 53 yr old BBC Hotwife

Great story. Well done. My mature white wife is a BBC slut. And she just loves to suck off much younger black studs. She often puts on a very tight dress nothing on underneath and bearly below her as cheeks with 5 inch slip on heels. Goes to a west indies grocery store in hopes of enticing a young black stud out to our SUV to suck him to completion . A true BBC slut indeed And most of the young studs enjoy sending their hot heavy loads down her throat while I watch from the front seat.

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114ualmost 5 years ago
Oh wow

Amazingly written,especially being based on a true occurrence..Bery well done Donna :) 5 stars for this btw AND I'm off too read the second part lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very hot

I would love to see a well hung black friend get my wife to suck him off like that. Without telling her I would tell him to keep doing it. See if he can get her addicted to being a nasty black cocksucker. Get her to meet him at the park during practice and become a nice white cocksucker for blackmen to enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
It's sexy because it's real

Well-written with the ring of a true story, told without prejudice or hyperbole, and all the better for it. So much shame around sex in our culture, which is sad but understandable. I still wish more such experiences for you (the self-professed sexiest 3 minutes of your life, after all); I can say from experience that it need not threaten your marriage or parenting or social standing, though a certain bravery and defiance is required. Best wishes to you Donna!

Falc570Falc570about 3 years ago
Good for you !

You called this a true confession. If that is so, I think its great that you had the experience. Most average people wish for a moment in the sun like your personel experience. I think its great when two people connect in a positive way and share someting special that does not disrupt or ruin their lives, its drama free, which is most impotant. Cherish the moment.

ContinentalPsyOpContinentalPsyOpalmost 3 years ago

love the confessional style; love the little details provided about Donna's psychology.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story, love how he works her and when the time is right, get the prize. Also love how she doesn’t fight him and accepts that she enjoys how big his blackcock is. If she was my wife and she told me I would send her back and as our son was playing ball my wife could be sucking blackcocks in the parking lot. Hope he tells the younger black coach’s and they each meet her in the car till she’s addicted to being a nasty black cocksucker.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When I got home I knew something was wrong signals between my wife Katie and our oldest son Raymond. I let it rest. In bed I asked Katie what was going on between her and Ray? She asked me to hear her out until she was done explaining. I said talk. She explained what happened between her and one of Ray's coaches. She said that she really messed up and let it go further than she should have but came to her senses and stopped it she saidthatshemadeitclearthathehadbetterstayawayfromher.Derek the coach was a big black guy that I had heard rumors about being a lady charmer. Derek threatened to tell me about her if she didn't cooperate with him. She said for him to keep his mouth shut because she was going to tell me anyway and if he didn't believe her she would scream rap. She turned to walk away and seen Ray at a distance. That was why Ray was so upset she also told Ray that she would explain everything to me. I went to have a talk with Derek. Of course I made some threats to him if he was to try causing any problems. He left us alone. I was expecting that he might do something to Ray but he didn't. It just seems like every sence blm there has been a lot of changes in our area. Our sheriff's and police have to be extra careful when it involves blacks. Our family donated along with several other people so law enforcement could get bodycams. It has saved a lot of trouble for our officers white and black.

Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Zieglerabout 1 year ago

Sexy confession!! You’re wild.

brittany69brittany6911 months ago

omg, I now have a new fantasy now to think about laying in bed.

That was really good read, you got me.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Yes the black quarterback thought that he was a gift to the ladies. When he was inappropriate with my wife he earned a 2 red eye's, a cut lip and sore ribs. LOL I wasn't going to put up with that shit.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Donna, I’m not here to judge you. Just wanted you to know that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. You are very articulate and descriptive with your writing. How to read more about your experiences.

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