All Comments on 'My Initiation'

Loved it & fantastic, wish it were I mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Pleaaasssseee Continue. I really want to find out what happens.

Superb story, very well written. Thanks for the pleasure - and keep writing :-)

Beautiful story and I loved the build up, No wham bam but just exciting romance leading up to the moments of fully having each other. Will be looking for more of your writing. Thanks

Besides it being a wonderfully written story, grammatically and spelling wise, I was drawn into its characters.

Keep up the good work.

A terrific story to be sure, but right at the end, the part about making the transformation medically was kind of a shocker; not sure if that means removal of the male parts altogether or not.

You wrote a good one here. As a person who lives in this lifestyle I enjoyed the way the two met.

I really enjoyed the story. I do hope there is more to it. I am waiting to see how it continues.

Wonderfull story, I wished it were me in the story!! Such attention to details such as the feelings, emotions and of course, wonderful discription of the clothing.

A great story.

The story is exceptionally well written and provides enough details to make it believable. However, the transformation ending is a letdown for me and just does not seem to fit the rest of the story.

you say you are not gay. thats fine. but i would love to lick those beautiful cheeks, pull down your virginal white panties, spread thoes cheeks and bury my face in you...sucking, licking, ramming my tongue in you. i bet if a very few minutes i could suck some wonderful cum from our clit.an ass as lovely as yours sould be licked, sucked...fucked. try it darling.

Them boys'r cocksuckers! Dressin up like wimen'n prancing round. Them's says, Iffin it quacks like a duck, and Iffin it walks like a duck, well, then, it done be a duckie. Yassir. Them little cocksuckers heading down to that bar for some prick teasin. They most likely getting some on the side too.

This was an exceptionally well-written short story. The subject matter wasn't quite to my taste, but I was drawn in and read on to the end anyway. The typos and punctuation errors are the only thing keeping it from a 100-vote.

I loved your story and do hope you write more along the same lines.

One of the best of this genre.

It's disgusting if you ask me. Very poor. A real let-down. And I know a lot of people are going to disagree but I don't care, it's disgusting.

Even though i am not into or interested in cross dressing, this story was interesting to read. It is well written and kept the readers interest alive.

Keep writing and i will check up on your other stories too, If any.

This story was very romantic and sweet. It brought back memories of falling in love for the first time - both people want to move forward, but both are afraid to push the other too far. The idea of "we're not gay" would ordinarily make me cringe, but it works in the story (and the characters work that out in the end). I would've rated it a 5 if there had been a little more proofreading done. Thank you for an enjoyable read.

i thoroughly enjoyed your story. It's very well written, your dialogue is excellent, the characters are vivid and the descriptions are also right on.

oh what a wonderful story. I have searched high and low to find such a beautiful crossdressing story.

thank you so much for taking the time to make my dream come true

Thanks

julie

this has got to be one of the best works i've ever found.

love, exceptince, sex, men, embracment of differences, wounderfull development of story an characters.

this is almost exactly what a fantasy story should look like.

don't ever stop writing like this

A well written story with well developed theme. Keep writing as you have a good skill. You have found a nice balance between narration, verbal interraction and action. People who pan others work and then dont have the guts not to be anonymous should make the effort to write their own stories to put their money where their mouth is!!

Will be looking out for future work by you.

Would have rated it higher but it needs editing, especially the punctuation. Also, the last bit about "The plan for next year is to complete the transformation medically." should have been left out. It is an unnecessary and jarring conclusion to the story. Up until then it seemed neither of them had a problem living as women who happened to have cocks. What happened? Are they both going to go under the knife or just one of them?

A beautiful story - much more please

Supremely well written, just enough to make you want to keep on until the climax! And from a crossdresser's viewpoint, congratulations on a fine effort, your talents are truly appreciated.

Suzie

It was reaaly wonderfull reading it. Gosh! Its 4 AM, i started at 1am, couldnt stop going through it fully.

Wish even I could find such a partner.

Simply lovely. I enjoy it more every time I read it. More please!

loved the story! but soap & hand lotion... ouch! i was getting all into the story, then a soapy finger? thanks, but no thanks. switch them to something else. not only would it be discomforting later, it's not lube and wouldn't last, and look at what's in those lotions and soaps, nothing i want to have up my backside, that's for sure. i agree with the other comments about the surgery, too abrupt and open-ended. xoxo

please write more!! i loved it!

as someone who has cross dressed for years and have intimate with shemales, enjoyed very much what has been my dream: make a shemale my mistress and live with her but dressed as a woman, lesbians if you will

Di

I love the kindness and realness of your stories. The lack of slutty behaviors is so refreshing, just gentle honesty rewarded with love and erotic tenderness. Thank you.

I really liked this story. Really well written, no spitefullness, wonderful.

Beautiful and sexy and loving!

Being a man, just as i would like to come out if only that were possible

This story was well written and very enjoyable, one of the best I have read. I would agree with others that the final remarks about presumably surgical changes (to one or both of them?) was probably not needed. Also there were a few typos which slipped through (and I know how difficult it can be to pick them up in your own work).

i hope to read more about yinz gals

You realy cought my thoughts about wearing female clothing and how i would love to progress.

Its a shame that it is just in my head and not possable but i would like to read more.

i wish i was michelle

Well paced, well written and very hot!

hot hot hot! although the end was jarring, like others said, and kind of a let-down after such a fantastic story.

Hi

I am a mature bisexual crossdresser and enjoyed the story very much. I would love to have a crossdresser for a roommate and lover.

Sincerely,

Josie of Augusta, Georgia

Great story. I would've like it more if Michelle would've been much bigger so I could've read about Steve crying and moaning as he took every inch in his virgin hole.

Great story I am in my 60s and have been dressing since my teens. I wish I could live the lifestyle all the time

loved it, excellent pace to the story and very hot!!

i was 15 the first time i tried on girl's clothes. I loved it and had a terrific orgasm from just wearing a girdle, nylons, and silky pink panties - without even playing with my "thingy"!! i'm in my 60s now, too, and wish i'd lived a life like this story describes!!

this is one of the finest stories ever

This story gets me hard and horny every time I read it!!! I am still in the closet but want my first experience to be like this!!!

Being a muslim living in a very orthodox conservative society, I can just dream. But if I can, I will live like a woman openly like these guys, find a husband for myself. Currently I just dress myself secretly.

As a straight practising heterosexual (if I practice enough, I might get it right), I found this story wonderful. It was well eritten and described a beautiful transformation. The sex was low key but compelling, and highlights what I strongly believe - if a story is well written, the content doesn't matter nearly so much. A favorite for me and worth more than 5 votes if that were possible.

You are an amazing writer! The sensitivity, the timing, the elegance of the story, are wonderful, so rarely seen on these websites. You must be a writer in real life as well? Or one who has read a great deal or been very well educated? What I liked most about the story was the way you showed Michelle's femininity without excessive laundry lists of clothing and makeup. You were never heavy handed, always delicate with the narration, and the dialogue was sweet and feminine. I had no trouble with the ending, but I understand why some were put off. Those who don't write a lot can't understand how difficult endings are, when you're tired of a story and want to move on! I saw your ending as that: A quick and sensible closing summary, like "and they lived happily ever after." Most of the interest and joy had already been given your readers in the earlier chapters, so why hang around when you can move to a new story? PLEASE DO SO? PLEASE WRITE MORE!

brilliant!!! at last a story that isn't all about the sordid side of sex!

a story with a real sense of love, life and the underlying lust that's in all our minds

this is the best piece of writing i have viewed on this site , i loved every word the descriptions of the lingerie were exquisite just wished that I could have been there it seemed so real

This story was very well written kept me going from one page to the next. Keep it up.

Interesting...just enough sex to know it's in the right category but it's covered by the gentle transformation of the storyteller, without the gaudy appearance of most of the stories of a similar vein that I've read here. You did well, convincing me that this was a transition that could happen in real life, were the money for the extensive wardrobe changes really available...but it's just an example of fantasy fiction, correct? (And speaking of "correct," there were several spelling errors that the English Major in me caught--you'd do well to have a fine piece of literature like this gone through by an editor; I imagine the powers that be here could offer you that service.)

I felt drawn into this story. I wanted to be the one shown her transexual side. I envy their ability to be their selves the rest of their lives. I want to see more on their progression. I hope these characters begin hormones and share their long transition on hormones with us. I want to learn and cum from their breast and other developements.

Initiation, training and submission! You pulled all of us in with soothing, hypnotic thoughts and words only to leave us with emptiness - still waiting to hear more. You realize you've created a following out here seeking this new universe that only exists in shadows, people hiding to protect their private pleasure cultures. Stories like this give perfect meaning to the phrase "out of the closet". Your crafty creations here will live on in the minds of your readers.

"Very good," says another humble servant.

Whoever wrote this is a professional writer - or at least, has written a great deal in one genre or another. And as a fellow Englishman and still learning the joys of cross dressing and bi-sexuality, I applaud him or her. Well done! X

A lovely sexy story

A good read

This is truely a beautiful story of two people falling in love, that it has to do with 2 TVs is amazing, yet its written in a way that allows you to come along for the ride, without losing any sense of reality. PLEASE continue this story, I'm sure we would all love to read more of these two people, and thank you for writing such a beautiful story for us all to read!

Beautiful, excellent, hot, sexy, turn on story! Awesome. Unique. Congrats!

Very sweet story! Wonderful ending!

Slowly and carefully developed,with a logical ending. Brits can do some of this fantasy stuff in a way we Americanos cannot. A logical and endearing progression of the plot.

Finally, a story that is positive and endearing. I'm so tired of the power plays and domination that seems to proliferate here and connected to transformation. It doesn't always have to be something forced or coerced and you've offered an great example of a loving relationship well worth multiple reads. Nicely done.

Your other story "A Flash of Lace" is equally well done and positive.

I dissolve into a story so well written that one sees ones self as the character. The descriptions, feelings,not words.

Thank you for the memory. Now to seek!

Absolutely the BEST story that I have read here on Lit. Talk about transformation! Questioning a lot of my feelings after reading this, wondering what I may have missed in my 61 years. Absolutely great story!

A true love story. They didn't care what they were. Just loved each other!. Very well written, good detail and I enjoyed it very much. Even a little jealous!

And the "true" tag just made it worse.

Why in the WORLD would someone choose to label this story as ugly? Momma once said, and so have a bunch of other people, "If you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all!"

The person that called this story "ugly" should take a page from momma's book and keep silent.

A few hiccups, and I have to admit a few times where I skipped over the descriptive parts, but otherwise, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. When I began reading, I really thought that the guy taking Michelle out would be the guy to her girl and was surprised when she dressed him up. Even more surprised when he segued so smoothly into she.

All in all, I like the story, like the writing, and like the ending. Please ... disregard the "ugly" comment. I do believe that everyone has the right to express themselves, but without some sort of constructive criticism ... "Well that was ugly," is just ... well ... ugly.

...Is its from 2006 and no additional chapters written! Thats horrible and almost makes me want to cry that this author has stopped writing such beautiful stories as this one. That there's yet another anon comment as stupid as the "that was ugly" one doesn't surprise me. Over the past couple weeks, someone has been leaving little nasty comments that make no sense on many of the more romantic author's stories, and I'm pretty sure they have made attempts to pull down the ratings of these stories by logging in under several dozen faked IDs and scoring the title low (a 1 for instance), and if they keep it up, they will be caught.

To this day, this is my favourite story on all Literotica! :)

I'd wish there was more, but I think this story is perfect as it is.

<3

I really loved the writing, especially the very good descriptions of how dressing in lingerie, and other women's wear felt. So very well done. I would like to meet a Michelle!

This is the best story and I think it is marvelous, erotic, sexy and a great love story. It would be something any true gurl would want to happen to her. I just loved the story line and characters described along with the details of each event. I am glad this took a time to develop as this added to the excitement of waiting for "So what happens next." If anyone has put on female clothes and lingerie you would know the wonderful feeling and excitement of that experience, something you never want to end. I too am sorry this author has not written more on this story as I would love to hear what happen next. Looking forward to running into my Michelle or Steve for that matter.

One of the best I have ever read, I wish I could be so lucky to find the love the found

It's been several months but it is the 3rd time I've read this story. Enjoyed it each time!

This is the first story I have read on Literotica and if they are all this good I will be delighted

This is a well written erotic story

needs more chapters to where they both get the srs done

Probably the best story I have ever read on Literotica. Came twice reading it. YUMMY!!

I really really enjoyed this story it got me so aroused as this would be a dream come true for me

Finally a story without bondage or violence, just dressing and love. My compliments.

You address so many fears and desires in this one short story it's amazing. Well done.

I felt a real connection to the characters. Thought I would cum when they first made love. well done

would love the same.xx

I love the story please keep it going.

That story is so well written and so very hot with raw emotion. My pussy is so wet reading the story. Can;t wait to read more of your stories xoxo

What a beautiful story.

Such a fantastic story, very erotic I am so jelous of those girls

Great story well written. Have had similar fantasy and love to read this one over and over. Makes me cum!

A wonderful opening, a sweet and sex middle. ...and a happy ending that, honestly, earned a couple of tears💋

This is one of those stories I come back to again and again. It gets me hard throughout and keeps me hard and dripping. It is the relationship I wish I had!

Just the best love story, well written. Thank you.

That is a great story erotic but smooth well done

I read this lovely story because it brought back my own feelings when I was 29, I had dabbled with bisexuality since I was a teenager....at 22 I got married to a wonderful sexy woman who knew nothing about my past 'leanings'....having also worn lingerie for men ( usually older ) I started dressing again ...at first with Lynn's , then gradually I built up quite a collection of my own...it came to an abrupt stop when Lynn caught me in front of the computer dressed in stockings,bra and panties being watched by a few men online as I stroked my cock for them ( she exploded calling me all sorts of names...and to be truthful,she was right )

From that time on, our marriage declined ...then she met a REAL man ( as she put it )... Divorce followed soon after and she left the area when he got a job in the south of the country....then I met Dave( online of course )

Dave too was divorced , same as me ,he was caught dressed but sadly 'outed' by his wife ( mine didn't ...bless her )

He had moved North after his divorce and was seeking like minded friends

beautifully written, sensitive and felt real. Fairy tales can be the life we wish to have. and the lucky few get to have it, xx

This is the best story I have seen on this site. It was written really well and the plot was so real life

Mine happened when I was 17.... my aunt ( bless her ) had arranged for me to have piano lessons with our music master from grammar school ( Ken )... He was also the musical director of the local 'am- dram ' society

The first few weeks were predictably boring, playing scales etc and learning to read and write music....he always stood very close by my shoulder at the piano and was very patient ( he had to be!!!...I wasn't a natural )

On the 4th Sunday he gave me some different music to try and play, saying it was for the upcoming Xmas show they were doing ( Peter Pan ).. as I grappled with it, he asked if I would join the group .... I thought about it then agreed...he said I would make a perfect Peter, being small and slim ( a bit girlish really ) and disappeared upstairs ,returning a few minutes later with some costumes over his arm

I finished my playing and he said I should try on the costume, so I did in the hallway ( it was far too big )... Then he said why not try on the Tinkerbelle costume....I was a bit reticent , but he persuaded me....I went into the hallway again and took off my pants and underwear etc and pulled on the white tights, before stepping into the tutu...the effect was incredible...the feel of the tights on my bare skin was electric and I was getting an erection...trying to hide it I went back in to the room where Ken was standing by the piano

' oh yes ...much better ' he said walking towards me , then kneeling down he 'straightened my seams' ....his hand accidentally brushing my 'bulge'

all he said was ' my my ..you like these tights don't you '

I couldn't speak ( mouth too dry ) as I felt his hands wandering all over me....my cock was rock hard to his touch , then he stood up and pulled me close to him and I felt his hard cock prod my stomach ( he was a bit taller than me )

He then stood beside me, his hand gripping my cock and asked if I liked what he was doing....I nodded yes and felt powerless as he slowly undressed me before laying me back on the couch, my aching cock sticking straight up...kneeling on the couch, he bent over and licked the head ( I came so hard it was all over his face )

Excellent story very well written so erotic

I love to dress up and was passable when I was younger, not so much now that I am older but I do not go out locally anyway. I used to attend the "Be All" convention that I think is now just held in Chicago now in June of each year. It used to move to different cities when I was going back in the 1990-1999 area. I miss the wonderful people that did all the hard work to put them on. My very first try to go down to the convention room took several attempts as I was so afraid. So glad I managed to do it as everyone was so nice. I also hope that you continue this story so we can follow the two of you on your history. da.cd@frontier.com

Sensitive and artfully written with such emotion and depth of feeling. This story really sucked me in, no pun intended LOL (belly laugh out loud). If only the world would allow individuals to live and let live as they chose, and not be so damned judgmental, this reality could be such a beautiful thing for those who chose it. To love who and how we chose...what a concept. Wonderful story...a masterpiece.

Thank you for sharing your stories. I love them and was captivated and could imagine myself as either of the girls. I cannot wait to see more from you. The stories are easy to follow and except for some minor grammar issues I loved them!!!

Toni

One of the best i have ever read. I give it 10 stars.

Absolutely believable and well written.

I look forward to reading more of your stories.