All Comments on 'A Creative Challenge Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
very good series

I'm really enjoying this. You're taking your time and developing it slowly, and each installment is a pleasure to read.

I look forward to more!

ohio

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Intersting

Your still in low gear, but at the top end of the rpms.

This has the earmarks of a very enjoyable series.

Please continue.

hedomanhedomanabout 18 years ago
Keep it up!

Your story keeps getting better and better. Unlike most of the stories at Literotica you concentrate on the psychology instead of the physiology. It's one of the few stories that actually draws you in and makes you want more.

bisexygirlbisexygirlover 16 years ago
Nice

it's nice to read a story that is well done and builds nicely. I would like it to move a LITTLE quicker, but I'm definately happy with your thinking.

I'm intrigued and I like it....

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