by Pvidal
I'm really enjoying this. You're taking your time and developing it slowly, and each installment is a pleasure to read.
I look forward to more!
ohio
Your still in low gear, but at the top end of the rpms.
This has the earmarks of a very enjoyable series.
Please continue.
Your story keeps getting better and better. Unlike most of the stories at Literotica you concentrate on the psychology instead of the physiology. It's one of the few stories that actually draws you in and makes you want more.
it's nice to read a story that is well done and builds nicely. I would like it to move a LITTLE quicker, but I'm definately happy with your thinking.
I'm intrigued and I like it....