All Comments on 'Hiding'

by RedHairedandFriendly

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
seranadeseranadeover 18 years ago
Better way

Encouraging and a very nice thought. The poem flowed very well, I would add the word 'me' after 'bother';

I try not to let it bother

To keep it tucked away

Thank You

Alby-reading

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

Most people know what they've done wrong,

That's not what your spouse should hear;

Your spouse should hear what's been done right,

And with support the wrong will clear.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A very apt title

DC:

Those who care will always be there. Thank You. Ronnie W.

hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Desperation

Desperation and loneliness well written.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous