All Comments on 'Range of Motion'

Very nice little piece of work.

Very nice use of language.

Well done!

If that's all you wanted to write you did a good job. To bad it's with two people I know nothing about and care even less about.

I do wonder why you call it a romance? I saw lots of lust, But not a bit of romance.

Metzov

I enjoyed reading this the first time and again a second time. I found the woman's desire for the gentleman evident as well as his desire for her. Very well written romance between two people... I love romance and there is a mixture of passion, love, romance, lust, desire, want, and need evident in this work. Congratulations Wyld~its a winner to me. :D

~Red

Didn't see much romance here.

...this is even better than the first version I read! What an inspired, well-written tale of love and desire between two consenting adults! There was enough romance there to harden even the hardest of hearts...(and other organs, as well!) Thank you, dear, for the best time I've had in a long time...and keep writing. I need more!