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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A nice different view

Of a tree's dance;

Where have we heard that before <grinning>.

Nice touch with that acorn

Bringing the tale full circle.

BTW - that should read dying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
traced by the wind

a tighly woven tale riding upon the trails of the dance...nice/blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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good choice to leave the lines short, it gave the effect of being tossed by the wind, very loose and flowing. I like the idea of the sun being pushed aside. nice write!

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Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Apparently the wind is natures Fosse.

nightangeltearsnightangeltearsabout 18 years ago
another winner

I read them all and i get more impressed with every one i read...wow,awesome

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