All Comments on 'Kimberly's Revenge'

Title confused me and the story didn't clear it up very well

Misleading title, poorly written 0/10 try harder

A fairly nice if frustratingly short story, vingette really. Well enough written. Still wondering about the title, but i'll get over it. Thanks for writing.

ummm.......wat revenge? i thought the story was great but watsup with the title?

Great story...both of them were great!