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Spirit Body

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by WickedEve01/14/06

good poem

These lines are really nice:
I am the shimmy and sway
of the white birch leaves
burning in the fall

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by Anonymous01/14/06

Good, yes

So many great images throughout this short poem. Well done! Now I'm off to read your other work.

Tess

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by TheRainMan01/14/06

Nice read.

Pleasant enough.

I agree with Eve, the best lines are:

I am the shimmy and sway
of the white birch leaves
burning in the fall,

I think some of the other images are not new and fresh enough to raise the poem up. But your writing is consistently interesting, and I have a feeling there is much better poetry than this in you.

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by My Erotic Trail01/14/06

mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews" for Saturday 14, 2006



thanks for the journey
Art~

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by Alessia Brio02/17/07

I'm not surprised

... that your poetry would speak to me.

I need to read more. ~ Imp

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