All Comments on 'She stands broken'

Like this new style

Your word command shows;

My only suggestion would change

Mother Earth to Gaia

(even that change seems a bit lame).

Okay, so I'm a bit jealous ~

The two I'm working on won't let me go

And they refuse to get into shape - a poet's lament...

I like it. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I am uncertain if this is you or mother earth? but...nice write

Doesn't matter if it is you or mother earth, either way it is a strong poem.

Bold and vivid imagery. It screams pain.

in moments of time. TK U MLJ LV NV