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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz01/14/06

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Like this new style
Your word command shows;
My only suggestion would change
Mother Earth to Gaia
(even that change seems a bit lame).
Okay, so I'm a bit jealous ~
The two I'm working on won't let me go
And they refuse to get into shape - a poet's lament...

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by Ronnie Wachuka01/14/06

Very moving

I like it. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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by My Erotic Trail01/14/06

Gaya

I am uncertain if this is you or mother earth? but...nice write

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by Bill Dada01/15/06

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Doesn't matter if it is you or mother earth, either way it is a strong poem.

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by hugo_sam01/16/06

Strong

Bold and vivid imagery. It screams pain.

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by tazz31701/03/12

COULD GAIA AID

in moments of time. TK U MLJ LV NV

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