All Comments on 'Acrobatics 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good start!

This chapter lets us know a little about Mary and Joan, and it sets up the rest of the story.

2052Dreams2052Dreamsabout 18 years ago
Thought it was sexy; Joan is a good coach

I liked Joan, and Mary's wish to take care of her military guy.

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