All Comments on 'Acrobatics 04'

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kydreamrkydreamrabout 18 years ago
Quite a hot story, nice buildup

This is turning into one really hot story! You're combining good character development with a very hot plot. This may turn out to be one of the hottest stories I've read in a couple of years!

Strawberry_2051Strawberry_2051about 18 years agoAuthor
This wife puts on a show!

(From the author) OK, so I voted for myself. Even though I wrote it I really got attached to the wife character and enjoyed this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Cute story so far

I don't know if the way the girls react is realistic; it would have been more convincing if written by a woman, but the story is fun and resonably well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Everybody is sexy in this story

Thanks for including a very sweet, sexy wife; and one who is willing to share. At least a little.

OOAAOOAAover 10 years ago
Good chapter!!!

;)

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