by tammys_greg
I like the story but you could work on the legnth of the chapters a bit. Excellent otherwise.
Writing is very good...some usage problems but overall quite sound. Story is excellent, both likable (human and smart) and hot (a hard mix). The comment about length I agree with but primarily because one wants more of a good thing. Eagerly awaiting next installment.
This a great story. I wish it could happen to me. Wow.
I want to experience that feeling, being bent over and being used by her.