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The first paragraph foundered but the second was much better and the third was amazing. If you can write consistently like the third paragraph then it's time for you to get published.

Extremely impressive, such imagination.

All sorts of things make this so appealing. It's expressive, descriptive and imaginative. It made me think about memories, sleepless nights and recollections of times gone by, made me think of love.

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