All Comments on 'Radiant Feminine'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Chaos, Part II

Maybe it's the smaller pieces ~

I like this one better.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 18 years ago
A condensed eroticism

A fellow reader chose to call this breaking of the mold format: “chaos “(don’t worry that reader loves it too). I choose to see it as ‘condensed reality’, and in this poem as ‘condensed eroticism’.

Again, for readers who may see it in the new portal, you will understand if you dare (yes-a challenge) to look it up. What I was able to fish from this radiant pond is: “earthy scent of love/ an unbound wild mystery/ full hips like fleshy fruit/ ripe glorious full dark heat/ in her eyes a growing hunger”

Now I am going back to fish some more, can you blame me?

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
complete.

Never mind this is a poem. The words listed in this collage could well be used as an erotic dictionary. Words to evoke sexual feelings and emotions are quite plentiful. A poetic delight!

maineman4umaineman4ualmost 13 years ago
UNI QUE

Absolutely UNIQUE

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
MIX AND MATCH

make a phrase. TK U MLJ LV NV

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