All Comments on 'Valentine'

Nice contrast ~

Hard squares

Soft thoughts.

Colorful squares enhance the words contained in this rendering. The illustration pulls this together quite nicely.

I love the original idea, breaking into an experimental mode deserves an automatic credit. I enjoy the freedom to improvise which the loose structure allows the reader. Read it this way or another. You are actually given not "a text" but a cluster of several potential texts, all conveuing somewhat parrallell somewhat different content.

Given the romantic context I would have chosen a softer, less formal looking (a flow chart) visual for the same presentation, but that was a relatily small detraction.

to dates or time. TK U MLJ LV NV