Was a decent story until the end, unless you are into that sort of shit.
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Anonymous01/22/06
Come on now
How is Susie gonna get pregnant by Jake coming in her ass hole?
Somehow I think Jake is getting the better end of the deal here.
All Susan's hubby is getting is to fuck some old nasty, ugly , Jerry Springer show , looking nigger and Jake is getting prime white married pussy. For every Robin Givens and Halle Berry, there are a million Aunt Jemimas with cunts rivaling a Rhino's pussy, and smelling like a shrimp boat that has not been cleaned.
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Anonymous01/22/06
friend or not
id tell his black ass to clean it himself ..i had a nice black pussy i had to clean ...besides i didnt do his dirty work he did mine
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Anonymous01/22/06
Showing True Racist Colors Now Writer
It was evident you were a black cock watcher from the begining but more so now. The master little black cock cleaning aside your little black whore has virtually been forgoten as your work subordinate plunders your wifey poos asshole.
When your best friend's black cum cleanup request from your whores asshole cums from him to you, you didn't show the respect due him to jump fast enough to the sucking asshole job mandated.
Gosh this is going to go totally black cock watcher sicko isn't it writer as you appear to be sickly typing one handed now. Oh well another black wimp sicko story down the drain writer and after such a true to life start -- what a loser you are little sick one. Get some help soon!
I think these stories are a great way to express your fantasies. Ignore the crude comments from the losers who can't seem to enjoy reading others ideas. I personally like the visions you put forth, especially the white wife with big tits getting fucked by the black guy. There are times I fantasize about my big titted white wife getting layed by a black cock!
Keep up the good work
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Anonymous09/20/07
Ruined it
You were doing OK until you made the white man a wimp cuck fag.
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Anonymous01/01/08
Ending totally out of context
Your story had all the elements to be fairly good, until you decided to ruin it with your "surprise" ending. Unless you're planning on exploring cuckold adventures or "bbc" activities, the ending makes no sense. No likely "bbc" adventures, with a protagonist with only a slender black 5" cock, which makes the ending all the more unbelievable. Add in the mix that they're best friends makes your direction with the ending all the more strange.
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Anonymous02/10/08
Honestly
I thought the ending was a nice little kinky surprise. I mean some people act like they have never seen nastier in a porno. It's a totally creampie shot with a cuckold cleaning up the mess. As far as the racial stuff is concern...stop being so sensitive and pc. It's dirty bedroom talk! Get a grip! However, I do think white boy should handle his business with Janelle a little, freak it up a bit!
Loved the story dude, very well written and different from the other stories in this category. But I'd have to agree with what the others have said man. Your surprise ending ruined the whole story. The theme of the story was a white guy and a black guy who are best of friends and they share their wives by mutual consent and respect. But then you lower the white guy (who has a bigger cock) into a cuckold and that totally ruins it. Not gonna say more but if you chose to make the white guy a cuckold then the next story you will have to get Don to tell Jake to clean Janells pussy. Otherwise great story.
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Anonymous03/13/09
Surprised
Well I loved the whole story but the ending as it seems was difficult to understand!!! I would have rated it a lot higher if part3 had not ended in the fashion it did. What the fuck were you thinking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You know I could almost feel it comming the way you were writting this. Having Susan saying don't be surprised at what I do or say. I'm giving myself completely to Jake!! What she doesn't love you anymore!!!!!!!
I could go on and on, and it's to bad you felt this way and he's your best friend, Yah right. Not the way to end it!!!!!
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Anonymous08/09/09
I Liked It
I think the story was well written, and look forward to reading more of your work. As evidenced in the comments, your material is highly provocative.
I'd just like to say to "Come On Now", fuck you you racist piece of shit. What the fuck is a white supremacist asshole like you doing in the Interracial section in the first place? Your ass is out; everyone can see it but you. You read the story backwards, you dumb motherfucker. It was the white wife that was fat and sloppy. You inbred, short dick, Black penis envying (or secretly "loving") shit ass.
saw her husband being the one at her backdoor as the clean up guy. Makes you wonder, what will they do next??/
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Anonymous03/14/12
goodwhitewife
reminded me of the first time my wife fucked a black guy.he had her cumming from the second he slid his long tube into her slippery wet cunt.when he was ready to cum she took his cock from her pussy and sucked him till he blew a massive load down her throat.mmmmmm she looked so fucking hot doing him.
English
What the ****
Was a decent story until the end, unless you are into that sort of shit.
Come on now
How is Susie gonna get pregnant by Jake coming in her ass hole?
Somehow I think Jake is getting the better end of the deal here.
All Susan's hubby is getting is to fuck some old nasty, ugly , Jerry Springer show , looking nigger and Jake is getting prime white married pussy. For every Robin Givens and Halle Berry, there are a million Aunt Jemimas with cunts rivaling a Rhino's pussy, and smelling like a shrimp boat that has not been cleaned.
friend or not
id tell his black ass to clean it himself ..i had a nice black pussy i had to clean ...besides i didnt do his dirty work he did mine
Showing True Racist Colors Now Writer
It was evident you were a black cock watcher from the begining but more so now. The master little black cock cleaning aside your little black whore has virtually been forgoten as your work subordinate plunders your wifey poos asshole.
When your best friend's black cum cleanup request from your whores asshole cums from him to you, you didn't show the respect due him to jump fast enough to the sucking asshole job mandated.
Gosh this is going to go totally black cock watcher sicko isn't it writer as you appear to be sickly typing one handed now. Oh well another black wimp sicko story down the drain writer and after such a true to life start -- what a loser you are little sick one. Get some help soon!
lost it
You had me for a while then you lost me at the end.
Ignore the assholes
I think these stories are a great way to express your fantasies. Ignore the crude comments from the losers who can't seem to enjoy reading others ideas. I personally like the visions you put forth, especially the white wife with big tits getting fucked by the black guy. There are times I fantasize about my big titted white wife getting layed by a black cock!
Keep up the good work
Ruined it
You were doing OK until you made the white man a wimp cuck fag.
Ending totally out of context
Your story had all the elements to be fairly good, until you decided to ruin it with your "surprise" ending. Unless you're planning on exploring cuckold adventures or "bbc" activities, the ending makes no sense. No likely "bbc" adventures, with a protagonist with only a slender black 5" cock, which makes the ending all the more unbelievable. Add in the mix that they're best friends makes your direction with the ending all the more strange.
Honestly
I thought the ending was a nice little kinky surprise. I mean some people act like they have never seen nastier in a porno. It's a totally creampie shot with a cuckold cleaning up the mess. As far as the racial stuff is concern...stop being so sensitive and pc. It's dirty bedroom talk! Get a grip! However, I do think white boy should handle his business with Janelle a little, freak it up a bit!
Cool
Loved the story dude, very well written and different from the other stories in this category. But I'd have to agree with what the others have said man. Your surprise ending ruined the whole story. The theme of the story was a white guy and a black guy who are best of friends and they share their wives by mutual consent and respect. But then you lower the white guy (who has a bigger cock) into a cuckold and that totally ruins it. Not gonna say more but if you chose to make the white guy a cuckold then the next story you will have to get Don to tell Jake to clean Janells pussy. Otherwise great story.
Surprised
Well I loved the whole story but the ending as it seems was difficult to understand!!! I would have rated it a lot higher if part3 had not ended in the fashion it did. What the fuck were you thinking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You know I could almost feel it comming the way you were writting this. Having Susan saying don't be surprised at what I do or say. I'm giving myself completely to Jake!! What she doesn't love you anymore!!!!!!!
I could go on and on, and it's to bad you felt this way and he's your best friend, Yah right. Not the way to end it!!!!!
I Liked It
I think the story was well written, and look forward to reading more of your work. As evidenced in the comments, your material is highly provocative.
I'd just like to say to "Come On Now", fuck you you racist piece of shit. What the fuck is a white supremacist asshole like you doing in the Interracial section in the first place? Your ass is out; everyone can see it but you. You read the story backwards, you dumb motherfucker. It was the white wife that was fat and sloppy. You inbred, short dick, Black penis envying (or secretly "loving") shit ass.
Never
saw her husband being the one at her backdoor as the clean up guy. Makes you wonder, what will they do next??/
goodwhitewife
reminded me of the first time my wife fucked a black guy.he had her cumming from the second he slid his long tube into her slippery wet cunt.when he was ready to cum she took his cock from her pussy and sucked him till he blew a massive load down her throat.mmmmmm she looked so fucking hot doing him.
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