All Comments on 'Every Love'

by Sapphos Sister

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bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesover 18 years ago
first love of a poem is everything

i read this poem slow

i read this poem fast

it called out to me

unable to walk past...

it made me happy and got me to think

i had to enter its play

it faced me with true love

and gave no place, or time, to run away

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
loved it!

really related to this one,

great job as always...

~LB~

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Once again

Another quality write

With that last strophe

Pulling it all together

Bringing focus to the whole write.

PatsplaythingPatsplaythingover 18 years ago
It Just keeps Getting Better

All the poems you write, they just flow. They just keep getting better and better and better....

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