All Comments on 'a river's bed'

A different perspective ~

River caressing some hard wood.

I like these words: lapping curves, curl around smooth hard wood pointing to the sky, moist kisses. Of course, pulsing, too. I always like that word. :)

I enjoyed this, MET. I do believe (IMHO) it would've read smoother if this poem was written in a few stanzas, and or have punctuation. Other than that, excellent!

;) that's all i have to say! <<BIG GRIN>>

kisses,

T

Awesome play with the words and the meaning. Left me alittle wet.<blushing