All Comments on 'A Creative Challenge Ch. 19'

I think your chapters are getting shorter and shorter. They move the story along, but not enough of the detailed fucking that you do so well.

I suppose you're going to spread the M.H.C. initiation over several chapters, too.

And I suppose I'll enjoy every minute of it, even if I have to wait 24 hours between paragraphs, so to speak.

On to Jamaica!

Terrible Thomas