by KR
I was entrnanced........
Your attetnion to every erotic detail no matter how sublte gave me a complete picture....When you wrote how you fingernail cross his nipple....Omg I could feel it myself....this Piece was full of passion and lust in the most classy and delicious way...Thank you for writing it. I look roward to reading and hearing more of yoru thoughts and dreams
Kevin
Another well written, erotic fantasy KR. I love listening to you read your submissions. Can't get enough!!!
You write with great passion, KR, and to listen to your voice enhances the experience. Please don't retire your microphone...you're too good at it.
You're so comfortable the way you voice this out to us. Delicious, milky.
A professional writer and editor, I am in process of listening to and reading all your stories, both written and audio. What I find most erotic about this submission is not only your velvet voice (silk is nice too, of course) but expecially your breathing and sensual moans. The texture and nuance here is quite amazing, which I doubt even the most trained actress could emulate. You seem to have erased all barriers between fantasy and reality and the listener/reader shares, and is lost in, that intimacy. Superb! But one wishes to hear your orgasm.
Any chance of that? Or is it yours alone?
Very very nice! I was loving every word, and your silky deep sexy voice made it almost perfect. Very sexy love, well done