All Comments on 'Just in Time Valentine'

Mmmmm Art you are a true erotica writer. Such beautiful visions. Thank you for the beauty you pen!

L~

great valentine Art!

beautiful imagery...

~LB~

very panty wetting. A great tale that brings the beautifully flowing prose of the great poets with the sexual sensuality of pure erotica. Very Hot.

great as always

love you,

nin-

The words flow, neither prose nor poetry, but a delicious mix of the two. I enjoyed this. :)

of prose and poetry. I never had an English tutor but if I had, I would have wanted one like Rose.

Your work is always great

of prose and poetry. I liked the story, but I think you were a bit sloppy. Shame on you, as the shifting tenses mar a lovely Valentine addition. ;)

Good luck.

Black Tulip

Very erotic piece! Makes me wish that I had learned poetry in such a way. It was lovely, and good luck to you.

...on trying something a bit different. Thanks for giving us an interesting, enjoyable read.

Rumple

Why is it that I could never find a poetry class like that back in school?

R. Richard

Quite enjoyable.

What a unique piece!

With that kind of tutoring

I could ace every class!

Hi,

I read all of your poems and loved them- this is nice to see a story from you, also. Very moving and heart-felt.