All Comments on 'Diamond Head'

by JakeRivers

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great

Very poignant story!

Boyd

StuckInMyCornerStuckInMyCornerabout 18 years ago
How Intriguing!

I'm interested in seeing this story blossom into a story ripe with romance and drama.

saw_man1saw_man1about 18 years ago
Good things in come small packages

That seemed like a lifetime of longing put into one wonderful little story.

Blue88Blue88about 18 years ago
Sweet and Sad

Nice work, Jack. Illustrates the horror of war at a very personal level. Good job.

peggytwittypeggytwittyabout 18 years ago
Excellent!

There is definitely a lot you could do with this scenario. Good luck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Zinger of a story

Though perhaps a fantasy, there may be someone out there with a very near parallel experience. Good writing; tight, pointed, focused. Excellent.

Declan CravensDeclan Cravensabout 18 years ago
Short, but truly heartfelt

I'm beginning to think that you have lived a thousand lifetimes and are just spinning your wheels waiting for the next memory to come to fruition! Loved how you used the letters to convey Angie's love and loss.

Declan

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Absolutely Beautiful!

I love historical fiction, especially romantic historical fiction. Please expand on this story... I’d love to read it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
excellent

being a navy veteran myself i can see how something like this could happen.

good story

don

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
What happened to Angie and Steven's baby?

What happened to Angie and Steven's Baby?

BfreetorunBfreetorunabout 11 years ago
Don't re-write...

Unless you are going to have a miraculous saving of Steven's life, there is too much sadness in the world now. I love happy endings and do not like sad ones. Thank you.

pumpop201pumpop201over 6 years ago
A flash story deserves a flash review.

Wonderful.

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
THIS HAPPENED A LOT IN THOSE TIMES

WAR IS HELL especially for those left behind, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This does not only happen in times of war. Many "men", alive, will not own up to the responsibility of doing what they've done.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I could see the silver bars on his soldiers? Really??

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This was a good story. It suggests Stevie had a premonition of the next day.

It's sad he never got off the ground and at least have a chance to fight back.

I was born in 1947 and at age 6 I can remember some of the stories told by the men who fought that war.

Anonymous
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