by JakeRivers
I'm interested in seeing this story blossom into a story ripe with romance and drama.
That seemed like a lifetime of longing put into one wonderful little story.
Nice work, Jack. Illustrates the horror of war at a very personal level. Good job.
There is definitely a lot you could do with this scenario. Good luck.
Though perhaps a fantasy, there may be someone out there with a very near parallel experience. Good writing; tight, pointed, focused. Excellent.
I'm beginning to think that you have lived a thousand lifetimes and are just spinning your wheels waiting for the next memory to come to fruition! Loved how you used the letters to convey Angie's love and loss.
Declan
I love historical fiction, especially romantic historical fiction. Please expand on this story... I’d love to read it!
being a navy veteran myself i can see how something like this could happen.
good story
don
What happened to Angie and Steven's Baby?
Unless you are going to have a miraculous saving of Steven's life, there is too much sadness in the world now. I love happy endings and do not like sad ones. Thank you.
WAR IS HELL especially for those left behind, TK U MLJ LV NV
This does not only happen in times of war. Many "men", alive, will not own up to the responsibility of doing what they've done.
This was a good story. It suggests Stevie had a premonition of the next day.
It's sad he never got off the ground and at least have a chance to fight back.
I was born in 1947 and at age 6 I can remember some of the stories told by the men who fought that war.