All Comments on 'Droplets of Heat'

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
intrigued

your illustration heated the house up a degree or two <grin... nice write.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
~~

You need that ice

To cool down the heat

In this hot little write...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
The lover's lust comes to the fore

Passions rule, all else must wait,

Never enough needs say more

For these lovers joined by fate.

Thank You. Ronnie W.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
sizzling.

Shuddering with sexual passion, the heat of arousal ~ melts the frozen fruit of lust. With the illustration ~ a very hot rendering.

deathlynxdeathlynxabout 17 years ago
Short...

But amazingly sweet! Incredibly hot...

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Steaming hot...

and so sensual...love it. Thanks.

CeriseNoireCeriseNoireover 16 years ago
Oh my...

The poem is just as hot as the picture. Well done.

ChainzzChainzzover 16 years ago
sexy

very hot and sexy ...

I can feel the passion in your words

A ++

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
AN OFFSPRING AWAITS

the momma's milk. TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THE SUCKLING LOVES REMAINS

while the emotions settle/ TK U MLJ LV NV p/s this was a deep and diverse poem.

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