All Comments on 'Mom and Sisters Humiliated'

It started off well, then it looks as though you really were making it all up as you went along rather than havig a story line, towards the end i really wondered if you knew where you were going with the story it got so confusing. A little more thought and it would have been very good.

The story itself proves the first impression

The story description should have been enough of a warning. But no, I slogged forward and actually read it.

It was bad enough that the plot was so completely implausible.

But the writing was pathetic. Sentence construction? Grammar? Ever heard of homonyms?

I gather that you must have gotten permission to completely skip junior high school Language Arts classes.

Please, go somewhere and learn to write.

-- KVK

What a great story. This is for all the perverts out there. I believe the other comments you have received are unfair. This story is only for the more educated people.

Probably would have dreamed about this when I was 12 or 13 thiry or more years ago. The story title told it, it should have been enough reason to avoid it by someone who would not like this type of story. I would suggest that you put a disclaimer in the first paragraph so that anyone who reads past it would have no complaints.

great story. If this was your first, then we have great things to look forward to.

wow

this story was ridiculous, there is no way that it would happen but then again it is fiction and what I needed was something hard and quick to finish up so you get a pass. NExt time try and fix the typos please.

"Kate moaned,"Please, dad, stop. Please don't touch me anymore. I am a grown woman."."

Sounds like... well... sick.

More...More...More...Please

Make my day any time

GREAT!!!

I enjoyed it. Far from perfect and a little bit far fetched but that didn't disrupt the fun. A bit a real build or foreplay would have been nice as well as characterization. Truthfully, I've read things much worse and much better. Don't worry about people who hate it because of the S&M elements, they shouldn't be reading the story anyway.

even if a little unbelievable... I liked it a lot. The girls aren't resisting mutch. Anyway keep writting and posting !

i wish he was my dad

I mean... Humilated is not enough to describe this story. Literally all the sotrys in incest/taboo are family members ACCEPTING sex. But this... This is fucking wrong by god.

wish i was your sister :)

u and ur dad r mutha(and sister fkkers!! like no joke! my frend sent me a link 2 this and i knt believe u!!!!! tht is wht most people kall rapee! i noe tht this isnt evn true but like u r aa sick pervert 4 making this. if it is truueeeee thn send me a vid of thm to desertydiva88@hotmail.com. u probley wnt kuz i noe tht it isnt but lets c

THIS WAS INSULTING TO BOTH MALE N FEMALE READERS, TO READ A STORY ABOUT RAPE.......IT DIDNOT TURN ME ON AT ALL I MEAN INCEST AS A TOPIC AINT SO BAD BUT IF IT IS FORCED........RAPING UR OW FAMILY MEMBERS N GETTIN THEM PREGNANT U ARE ONE MESSED UP MOTHER FUCKER

I thought it was a great story. I liked it was forced.(l luv rape stories) love incest. Have some experience in that area. Keep writing, please!

Are you fucking retarded? Besides the fact that you can't use proper English, you are a disgusting pervert. You are a fucking loser. Get help.

Sorry but Rape, Humiliation and causing pain is the sickest form of sex.

Every one has their own preferences when it comes to sex and honestly this one turned me on really fast . Sickest form of sex perhaps but still really fucking hot to me.

Amazing im gonna read chapter 2 now.

this story was downright gross i mean i love erotic storys but rape is just wrongfull and mean if you injoyed it you have a disees you need help.

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ewww but ok

mmm baby that was good made me cum x

pussy loved it :)

I am not usually into family sex. But it was hot enough to get off to. thanks! :)

Tell more ex moms get pregnant and dilivers baby. And thé suck ön herr Milk tits. All 5.

Love the quick "btw mom got pregnant oops" line at the end. had me laughing!

I don't even like reading... but you my good sir are A MOTHER FUCKING GENIUISE REAL OR NOT make a video of your sister ;))))

hope this doesn't turn me against my daughters one day even if I did make this work I would eventually be charged with rape ... :((( but insecest is probably my sickest but biggest fantasy... I don't even have a sister :(

Wow...Just Wow. That is just amazing. I read a lot of wierd punishments and this is the best one ive ever read. You should really make a video of your sisters. Take an advantage of you power. 😉Well thats what I would do.

Omg, made me so horny, i rubbed my own clit. Would love to see video

Your story made me cum and cum I loved the domination and the punishment. I made me cum three times.

The kids are two girls and a boy and you think you need to tell us that they are not identical triplets!?!?!? "My dad was adiment" is an example of your atrocious spelling. You could shorten the story by just saying "Dad got mad so everybody took off their clothes and we had an orgy."

oh my gosh that was amazing i will read this all the time!

totally turned me on. just one question:

if you got your mum pregnant, if she had the baby then it would be your son/brother?

but PLEASE MAKE MORE

and a video ;)

Story obviously written by a thirteen year old, ugh. Wish I could get my wasted time back!

Clearly All Fantasy .....

Worst story ever!!

This is a totally fantasy ,as no father in the whole intire world would do such a thing.

I mean how could you think any were real? Dumbassses

My title says it all. This is such poor writing I almost hate to call it writing. I agree with many of the others. It sounded like a junior high student wrote it. And then. ..... and then ....... and then..... give up.

Omg...I never should have read this story..it has given me 4th stage cancer. So fuvking bad

The basic plot isn't too bad but the writing is far too juvenile. Keep practising and perhaps you will improve. Oh! and get a friend who has average English Grammar to proof read it to you. Best of luck.

You were apparently raised on a farm and miss the cows. If it's a cow you want I recommend a Jersey or a Golden Gurnsey.

Very very entertaining. Wish I was that boy or even the dad

And I am scarred once again.

It was awesome and loved it. The humiliation was priceless. I too learn by humiliation as the pain I do not learn with. So this reminds me of me. Not the scenario but the humiliation part.

You and your father won’t get away with it forever. In reality, you and your father would be turned in by your mother and sisters to the police and charged with rape and incest. Rape kits would be done and forensics would prove that the DNA, any loose hair follicles, and fingerprints belong to you and your father. Rape is a literal crime and add incest then you big boys got some hard time coming at least 10-20 years in prison for both you and your father. Guess what…inmates don’t like creeps who rape women and children so guess you and your father end up being their little bitches in the end which is exactly what both of you deserve. What goes around comes around.

Did not like it. A pure abusive BDSM fantasy. Stopped reading when Kate was told to take off her bra. try again.

Stupid 10 minutes of my life I will get back. Actually feel dumber by reading it.