by BettyBlue
You're off to a great start on what i hope becomes a multi part story. Can't wait for the next one.
A fine story. You're an excellent writer with a deft touch.
I felt myself in the mist both as an observer and participant. A great tribute to the men in uniform and the ladies who love them. Hope to see more
Good story and Good English...well written.
Hope there is a follow-up story.
Great story.. Very well written. Hope to read some more of your good writtings.
Great story, just the right length, and nice build up... thanks.
and all the better because it's set in my city. Thank you.