All Comments on 'Flowerless Valentine'

by BettyBlue

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great start

You're off to a great start on what i hope becomes a multi part story. Can't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Excellent imagery

A fine story. You're an excellent writer with a deft touch.

ksporksporabout 18 years ago
Primal

I felt myself in the mist both as an observer and participant. A great tribute to the men in uniform and the ladies who love them. Hope to see more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
good good

Good story and Good English...well written.

Hope there is a follow-up story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
bravo!

Great story.. Very well written. Hope to read some more of your good writtings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hot

hot - oh wow

lagneau blanclagneau blancover 12 years ago
Amazingly sexy

Great story, just the right length, and nice build up... thanks.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
How delicious...

and all the better because it's set in my city. Thank you.

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