All Comments on 'Hominid'

This is very original, well-researched, interesting, and even hot (can't believe I said that out loud! :) What a statement about how little difference there is between beast and man. You captured the feelings and longings of adolescence quite effectively. Good job!

DL, I'm so sorry that I didn't do this before (RVC)!

I enjoyed your story very much, and I rooted for Lance the underdog to overthrow the evil Oslo. As I mentioned before in the feedback thread, Alice struck me as flighty but this didn't take away from my view of the story. Good job.