by TheKupster
...to find a tale of a gentleman who really understands how to treat a lady with the respect she deserves!
The spanking part was very well done but after that you went somewhat too far with the inflicting of pain on her. Those big tits of hers needed fondling, fucking and sucking not abused.
So a lot more time needed/needs to be spent on those big tits of hers plus more time defining/describing the oral sex both given and received by the the two of them would do a lot for the story as well. And dry fucking her isn't any more enjoyable for the man than it is for the woman.
Basically this story could be very good with more tit action plus pussy stimulation and penetration. Also keep in mind that some women actually do enjoy the taste of their own fluids on a mans cock after being fucked by it. In their pussy not their ass. And a woman cumming inspite of herself is always a turn on in these type stories.
Looking forward to the rest of the fantasy.
Wow, all this and still only Chapter 01. What more to follow? Can'wait to find out. I was "uplifted" right from the opening sentence
It's always interesting to read these kinds of stories, but this one was especially compelling because you made her an older woman, and described her as having very large breasts. However, having started off with a fairly vivid description of Roberta's breasts, it would have been nice if Harry had spent a little more time with them while he was raping her. For example, it would have opened up a few more possibilities if he took off her bra before he started raping her. Starting the story with a description of her face, hair, etc. might also have helped. And while I'm all for having Harry forcibly cum in Roberta's vagina, it might have been better if he spent his second load cumming on her breasts rather than in her ass, but maybe that's just personal preference.
Otherwise, great story!
It's been way too long not to follow up on a story this good.
I am a 56 year old married housewife and I loved it !!!!!! As I read the story I started to dream about the big cock reamming out my butt as well !!!!!! Please write more !!!!!!!!
Good story, got me a bit hot, love a non-consent story in which the woman is not a gorgeous babe who starts to love it story could use a bit of editing (he came like a firehouse?) but good!
I'm a 47 year old married woman-this story was so hot I couldn't wiat for hubby-I used my vibe in my butt soooo good
Whatever happened to Roberta's Tit Torture? It could have been a classic!
.......up the arse! Reminds me of Mistress Maurela's buggering.
You've part written 2 excellent stories. PLEASE give us more. It's not too late
Been looking forward to the next installment of this fantastic story. Come on, it is not too late.
The rapist should find some clips or mouse traps and clip her nipples. Next take more pictures and upload to the web.
In spite of the errors, I think I've read it 4 times now. This was so my cup of tea
Brilliant, every mature woman should be vigorously buggered at least once a month, not necessarily raped, but sodomized into submission, then their husbands and partners might get a quieter life...
Other than the dry vaginal fuck and not more attention to her nipples, Loved this story. I'm a 66 yo woman and would have loved all of it. Keepjng her bra on and just moving it while fucking her, wow so hot. So degrading. I have been fucked (non con sensually) where the guy just moved the crotch of my panties to the side and pushed my bra up over my titties. Hottest sex ever.
A few typos but not bad. I'm afraid from the comments there is no part two. :(