All Comments on 'Full Circle'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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From the eyes of a child this small

These words speak of a tragedy of epic proportion.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 18 years ago
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Good job with the repetition. I like how you continue in each strophe with the last word in the strophe above. It makes the poem much more interesting.

BLACK BARTBLACK BARTabout 18 years ago
Heart touching

Well written, it reaches deep to ones soul, bringing back the fears and pains of a child, something we've all felt at one time...

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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