All Comments on 'Japan Guide Ch. 01'

Mr. Wesley,

What you have written is interesting, but it doesn't meet the subject matter standard. You would have been better off writing a couple of more chapters so that it would entice more people to read the rest of the story. I like the development of the lead charachter, but nothing has really happened yet.

WHY WRITE WHAT IS NOT FINISHED

A nicely developed platform on to which to launch your story. Very nice.