All Comments on 'Out of the Blue'

You always paint good scenes, sandspike. All of them are clear pictures as this.

You are a true inspiration 4 me this day ...such lovely images from a unique and

poetic soul humbles the heart of blue...a willow sprouts its wings..ty so much for your support...blue

and you might just have a writing neighbor kinda soon.:)

good work spike, always waiting for more from you. You make me feel closer to my natural home

xoxox

marrria

I enjoy your poetry and this one was sprinkled with the sandspike charm, thanks

suffers from an erratic rhyme scheme. The first stanza (while being shopworn) is so tight in flow it demands the rest of it follow.

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